by Jerky » Sun Jul 03, 2005 3:16 am
I wouldn't worry about the "you knows". At least your sentences made sense. My run-ons have run-ons. And anyway, I think it reads very naturally (due in no small part to the almost complete lack of editing).<br><br>PS - Have you watched Holy Mountain and/or Power of Nightmares yet? And, if so, what did you think of them? <p></p><i></i>